The Weaver

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Name: Shokkou▬Weaver
Type: Cloak
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S-rank
Durability: 150
Material: Special Chakra Woven Thread
Damage Type: Slashing, Piercing Type

Equipment Ability:

Appearance: Shokku is a black cloak with a black hood that is very lightweight. At the back of the wood is an Anbu like mask which is stitched into it. Whenever the user wears the hood, it appears as if he/she has eyes in the back of their head. The mask is white in colour with red stitching for eyes. The nose is also red, and its mouth looks feminine in design. On the back of the cloak is a wolf blue and white wolf stitched into it. The wolf is positioned in such a way that it appears it be leaping out of the cloaking while bearing its fangs. At the ends of the sleeves is white stitching all around. And, at the bottom of the cloak is the same white stitching. The cloak is fastened at the next by a black pin that is of the perfect design. This makes it quite difficult for the cloak to be snatched away by anyone. There are also a pair of white tassels attached to the cloak at the collar. The cloak itself also reaches down to just above the user’s ankles.

Ability 1: Shokkou has a unique ability where the user can manipulate the cloak to their liking. The material can extend up to 100 meters while also increasing in volume. With this ability in play, the cloaks durability is boosted by +50. The cloak replicates the user’s speed and power(strength). The user can have the cloak slash and pierce an opponent by applying a C-rank amount of Chakra. It is also possible for the user to manipulate the length and manner that the cloak moves. It goes without saying that the cloak can be used to protect the user and friends(allies) alike.

Ability 2: Shokkou can be used to apply a set of different techniques that the user possesses. Only two techniques that can be applied to the cloak. And once chosen, these techniques can be manipulated to change form. Senjiro’s chosen technique is the Hiraishin guiding thunder technique. The user can have the jutsu create a barrier that protects all around 360 degrees. The jutsu also maintains its integrity, capability and functionality. The jutsu can be activated and maintained by the user. And doesn’t require the use of hand seals to use the jutsu. Requires S rank Chakra cost for this ability.

Second Jutsu▬Swift Release Shadowless Flight. This is the second technique The technique works in conjunction the same way his FTG guiding thunder technique works. Senjiro is able to perform shadowless flight without the use of hands, readily able to activate the technique at a moments notice. Senjiro still has to pay the S-rank up activation cost and also for the jutsus upkeep. The technique is also used to its full potential, as it normally does when used without the Shokkou cloak.

Equipment jutsus: Hiraishin no Jutsu: Guiding Thunder.
Cost: 12,000 Ryo
Requirements: GM in Bukijutsu, be Senjiro or have his Chakra signature.

Subject: Re: The Weaver Mon Jul 02, 2018 8:21 pm

Senjiro Nara wrote:: Name: Shokkou▬Weaver
Type: Cloak
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S-rank
Durability: 150
Material: Special Chakra Woven Thread
Damage Type: Slashing, Piercing Type

Equipment Ability:

Appearance: Shokku is a black cloak with a black hood that is very lightweight. At the back of the wood is an Anbu like mask which is stitched into it. Whenever the user wears the hood, it appears as if he/she has eyes in the back of their head. The mask is white in colour with red stitching for eyes. The nose is also red, and its mouth looks feminine in design. On the back of the cloak is a wolf blue and white wolf stitched into it. The wolf is positioned in such a way that it appears it be leaping out of the cloaking while bearing its fangs. At the ends of the sleeves is white stitching all around. And, at the bottom of the cloak is the same white stitching. The cloak is fastened at the next by a black pin that is of the perfect design. This makes it quite difficult for the cloak to be snatched away by anyone. There are also a pair of white tassels attached to the cloak at the collar. The cloak itself also reaches down to just above the user’s ankles.

Ability 1: Shokkou has a unique ability where the user can manipulate the cloak to their liking. The material can extend up to 100 meters while also increasing in volume. With this ability in play, the cloaks durability is boosted by +50. The cloak replicates the user’s speed and power(strength). The user can have the cloak slash and pierce an opponent by applying a C-rank amount of Chakra. It is also possible for the user to manipulate the length and manner that the cloak moves. It goes without saying that the cloak can be used to protect the user and friends(allies) alike.

Ok spawn cool.

Ability 2: Shokkou can be used to apply a set of different techniques that the user possesses. Only two techniques that can be applied to the cloak. And once chosen, these techniques can be manipulated to change form. Senjiro’s chosen technique is the Hiraishin guiding thunder technique. The user can have the jutsu create a barrier that protects all around 360 degrees. The jutsu also maintains its integrity, capability and functionality. The jutsu can be activated and maintained by the user. And doesn’t require the use of hand seals to use the jutsu.

When ability two is used, it takes S ranked activation cost each time. But question, Hiraishin no jutsu is one technique that is applied to the cloak. What is the other?

Equipment jutsus: Hiraishin no Jutsu: Guiding Thunder.
Cost: 12,000 Ryo
Requirements: GM in Bukijutsu, be Senjiro or have his Chakra signature.

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ability 2 is s rank cost now. and i have no clue what the second jutsu will be yet Sad

. i need to create it. forgive me.

Subject: Re: The Weaver Tue Jul 03, 2018 4:41 pm

OK NP. Well its approved as is. So u have a second unused slot. Remember that

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Adding second ability.

Second Ability: Second Jutsu▬Swift Release Shadowless Flight. This is the second technique The technique works in conjunction the same way his FTG guiding thunder technique works. Senjiro is able to perform shadowless flight without the use of hands, readily able to activate the technique at a moments notice. Senjiro still has to pay the S-rank up activation cost and also for the jutsus upkeep. The technique is also used to its full potential, as it normally does when used without the Shokkou cloak.

Subject: Re: The Weaver Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:36 pm

This is approved

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Name: Ametsuchi Ono: Heaven & Earth War Axe
Type: Weapon
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S-rank
Durability: 200
Material: Ametsuchi Ono is made from rare and precious metals which makes the weapon perfectly balanced. There are also other specially woven materials that forms the makeup of the weapon. The weapon comes as a pair, but with subtle differences between them. The materials make the blade sturdy and sharp, lending greatly to defence and attack.

The Ametsuchi Ono twin axes both have a eighteen inches long shaft that acts as the handle of the axes.

Water Axe: The water axe is known as Kairyuu▬Ocean’s Current. The eighteen inches long shaft/handle is blue(mainly) and white in colour. The heel or toe of the tomahawk shaped axe is white in colour with blue scales. This covers three inches of the shaft, from the heel upwards. The scales closely resemble fish scales which keeps to the theme of the weapon. Looking at the shaft of the weapon, it is likened to life beneath the ocean. The blue of the grip looks like waves constantly crashing down akin to stormy seas. The grip portion of the weapon is seven inches in length, with finger indentations. Moving up to the axe’s belly/haft are designs of a great white shark swimming under water. This is on the right side and on the left side of the haft is the design of a carp with blue and white scales. The haft of the axe is five inches based on where the designs begin and ends. The neck guard of the axe again is the same as the heel of the weapon.

It has blue and white scales and is three inches in length. This makes up the eighteen inches long shaft. The shaft is also straight with the heel of the weapon slightly curved facing the outward direction of the blade. The axe’s blade is seven inches wide/long from top to bottom. The blade’s edge/bevel is extremely sharp and is of a crescent moon shape. The bevel is blue like the oceans, the cheeks have fish scale like patterns on either side. The scales are blue and white in colour. The axe’s head has the same design as the weapon’s shaft. A shark and carp are represented on the left and right respectively. The axe has no wedge but has a blunt end that acts as the back of the axe. Its shaped like a shark’s tail and is five inches long from top to bottom and reaches five inches in length.

Lightning/Thunder Axe: The thunder axe is known as Kiryuu▬Thunder Current. The eighteen inches long shaft/handle is dark grey like storm clouds. The heel or toe of the tomahawk shaped axe is dark grey, and on either side of the heel are green tomoe shaped designs. This covers three inches of the shaft, from the heel upwards. The tomoes are representation of the thunder god. The dark grey of the grip looks like storm clouds gathering in the sky. There are also streaks of blue lightning mixed in with the storm clouds. The grip portion of the weapon is seven inches in length, with finger indentations. Moving up to the axe’s belly/haft are designs of a green and yellow dragon. This is on the right side and on the left side of the haft is the design of the thunder god with his war drums. The haft of the axe is five inches based on where the designs begin and ends. The neck guard of the axe again is the same as the heel of the weapon.

It has the same green tomoe shaped designs and is three inches in length. This makes up the eighteen inches long shaft. The shaft is also straight with the heel of the weapon slightly curved facing the outward direction of the blade. The axe’s blade is seven inches wide/long from top to bottom. The blade’s edge/bevel is extremely sharp and is of a crescent moon shape. The bevel is dark grey like the stormy skies and has yellow streaks of lightning running along it. The cheeks have storm clouds on either side. The clouds look to be lit up by a light show of lightning. The axe’s head has the same design as the weapon’s shaft. The dragon and god of thunder is represented on the left and right respectively. The axe has no wedge but has a blunt end that acts as the back of the axe. Its shaped like a war drum and is five inches long from top to bottom and reaches five inches in length.

Damage Type: Slashing, Bashing & Piercing

Equipment Ability:

Ametesuchi Ono is the name given to the twin axes that are wielded by Senjiro. They can act independent of each other with their own unique features. Recognizing their individuality, each blade was given a name of their own. This is because they can act as a pair or separate entities.

Kairyuu▬Ocean’s Current

1st Ability: Kairyuu carries an affinity for storm and water release chakra, allowing the user to use storm and water release techniques through the weapon. Kairyuu is also one half of Ametsuchi Ono and is focused on its water release properties. The user of Kairyuu can generate high volumes of water covering large areas. The user can then manipulate, redistribute and utilise the water in various ways. The user can create highly pressurised waves of water to use as part of their defence and attack. Water and storm techniques gains a +50 boost to speed and power. For a heavy chakra cost of 200, the user can increase the power and damage of jutsu used by this weapon by +100. Kairyuu has a natural cutting power of 150. Water generated by Kairyuu has speed and power of 100. Cost S-rank amount of Chakra to generate and B-rank upkeep. The user can also use storm and water release techniques without hand seals. This is when the user is of course actively using Kairyuu.

Kiryuu▬Thunder Current

1st Ability: Kiryuu has an affinity for storm and lightning release chakra. This allows the user to use storm and lightning release techniques or abilities through the weapon. Kiryuu is also one half of Ametsuchi Ono and is focused on its lightning release properties. The user of Kiryuu can generate high volumes of lightning release chakra. The user can then manipulate, redistribute and utilize the lightning chakra in various ways. The user can disperse lightning chakra is a wide area. And can also use it as a focused attack, helping with defence and attack. Lightning and storm release technique gain a +50 boost to speed and power. For a heavy chakra cost of 200, the user can increase the power and damage of jutsu used by this weapon by +100.Kiryuu has a natural cutting power of 150 The user can use lightning and storm release techniques without hand seals. This is only possible when the battle axes are in use. Lightning generated by Kairyuu has speed and power of 100. Cost S-rank amount of Chakra to generate and B-rank upkeep.

Equipment jutsus: TBC
Cost: 10,000 Ryo

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Senjiro Nara wrote:: Name: Ametsuchi Ono: Heaven & Earth War Axe
Type: Weapon
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S-rank
Durability: 200
Material: Ametsuchi Ono is made from rare and precious metals which makes the weapon perfectly balanced. There are also other specially woven materials that forms the makeup of the weapon. The weapon comes as a pair, but with subtle differences between them. The materials make the blade sturdy and sharp, lending greatly to defence and attack.

The Ametsuchi Ono twin axes both have a eighteen inches long shaft that acts as the handle of the axes.

Water Axe: The water axe is known as Kairyuu▬Ocean’s Current. The eighteen inches long shaft/handle is blue(mainly) and white in colour. The heel or toe of the tomahawk shaped axe is white in colour with blue scales. This covers three inches of the shaft, from the heel upwards. The scales closely resemble fish scales which keeps to the theme of the weapon. Looking at the shaft of the weapon, it is likened to life beneath the ocean. The blue of the grip looks like waves constantly crashing down akin to stormy seas. The grip portion of the weapon is seven inches in length, with finger indentations. Moving up to the axe’s belly/haft are designs of a great white shark swimming under water. This is on the right side and on the left side of the haft is the design of a carp with blue and white scales. The haft of the axe is five inches based on where the designs begin and ends. The neck guard of the axe again is the same as the heel of the weapon.

It has blue and white scales and is three inches in length. This makes up the eighteen inches long shaft. The shaft is also straight with the heel of the weapon slightly curved facing the outward direction of the blade. The axe’s blade is seven inches wide/long from top to bottom. The blade’s edge/bevel is extremely sharp and is of a crescent moon shape. The bevel is blue like the oceans, the cheeks have fish scale like patterns on either side. The scales are blue and white in colour. The axe’s head has the same design as the weapon’s shaft. A shark and carp are represented on the left and right respectively. The axe has no wedge but has a blunt end that acts as the back of the axe. Its shaped like a shark’s tail and is five inches long from top to bottom and reaches five inches in length.

Lightning/Thunder Axe: The thunder axe is known as Kiryuu▬Thunder Current. The eighteen inches long shaft/handle is dark grey like storm clouds. The heel or toe of the tomahawk shaped axe is dark grey, and on either side of the heel are green tomoe shaped designs. This covers three inches of the shaft, from the heel upwards. The tomoes are representation of the thunder god. The dark grey of the grip looks like storm clouds gathering in the sky. There are also streaks of blue lightning mixed in with the storm clouds. The grip portion of the weapon is seven inches in length, with finger indentations. Moving up to the axe’s belly/haft are designs of a green and yellow dragon. This is on the right side and on the left side of the haft is the design of the thunder god with his war drums. The haft of the axe is five inches based on where the designs begin and ends. The neck guard of the axe again is the same as the heel of the weapon.

It has the same green tomoe shaped designs and is three inches in length. This makes up the eighteen inches long shaft. The shaft is also straight with the heel of the weapon slightly curved facing the outward direction of the blade. The axe’s blade is seven inches wide/long from top to bottom. The blade’s edge/bevel is extremely sharp and is of a crescent moon shape. The bevel is dark grey like the stormy skies and has yellow streaks of lightning running along it. The cheeks have storm clouds on either side. The clouds look to be lit up by a light show of lightning. The axe’s head has the same design as the weapon’s shaft. The dragon and god of thunder is represented on the left and right respectively. The axe has no wedge but has a blunt end that acts as the back of the axe. Its shaped like a war drum and is five inches long from top to bottom and reaches five inches in length.

Damage Type: Slashing, Bashing & Piercing

Equipment Ability:

Ametesuchi Ono is the name given to the twin axes that are wielded by Senjiro. They can act independent of each other with their own unique features. Recognizing their individuality, each blade was given a name of their own. This is because they can act as a pair or separate entities.

Kairyuu▬Ocean’s Current

1st Ability: Kairyuu carries an affinity for storm and water release chakra, allowing the user to use storm and water release techniques through the weapon. Kairyuu is also one half of Ametsuchi Ono and is focused on its water release properties. The user of Kairyuu can generate high volumes of water covering large areas. The user can then manipulate, redistribute and utilize the water in various ways. The user can create highly pressurised waves of water to use as part of their defence and attack. Water and storm techniques gains a +100 boost to speed and power. Kairyuu has a natural cutting power of 150. Water generated by Kairyuu has speed and power of 100. Cost S-rank amount of Chakra to generate and B-rank upkeep. The user can also use storm and water release techniques without hand seals. This is when the user is of course actively using Kairyuu.

Make the boost a +50 to speed and power of the jutsu being used under this ability. For a heavy chakra cost of 200, the user can increase the power and damage of jutsu used by this weapon by +100. Jutsu used must of course be tapped normally.

2nd Ability: Kairyuu also shares the same ability as Kiryuu. The user can manipulate the flight of the weapons. This means Senjiro can send the weapons flying and control its movements. It acts as a form of telekinesis. The user can only control the weapons like this up to 120 meters away their person. The weapons moves at the user’s current speed. This means the axes can be useful in melee and in ranged combat. Their movements and the like are under the user’s control. If the weapon goes outside the user’s range of control, then they cannot manipulate it. This is unless the user or the weapons are brought closer together. While out of the user’s grip, the axes can still use their techniques and abilities, and are controlled remotely by Senjiro. This allows him to spring surprise attacks. And constant use of their natural abilities and capabilities. (This ability is for both weapons, will be purchased as two abilities).

It's unclear to me just how you are obtaining control of these weapons without having to hold them. You can use puppetry or even shadows to attach appendages to the weapons and control them that way. Also decrease the range to 60 meters.

Kiryuu▬Thunder Current

1st Ability: Kiryuu has an affinity for storm and lightning release chakra. This allows the user to use storm and lightning release techniques or abilities through the weapon. Kiryuu is also one half of Ametsuchi Ono and is focused on its lightning release properties. The user of Kiryuu can generate high volumes of lightning release chakra. The user can then manipulate, redistribute and utilize the lightning chakra in various ways. The user can disperse lightning chakra is a wide area. And can also use it as a focused attack, helping with defence and attack. Lightning and storm release technique gain a +100 boost to speed and power. Kiryuu has a natural cutting power of 150 The user can use lightning and storm release techniques without hand seals. This is only possible when the battle axes are in use. Lightning generated by Kairyuu has speed and power of 100. Cost S-rank amount of Chakra to generate and B-rank upkeep.

Same as above. Boosted speed and power is +100 is not gonna happen bring it down to +50. And with a chakra cost of 200 for each use of this option, you can increase the power and speed by +100.

Equipment jutsus: TBC
Cost: 10,000 Ryo

Mizukage Posts : 253 Join date : 2018-05-14

Made those edits and also removed that second ability. I have renewed inspiration for a different idea now.

Subject: Re: The Weaver Tue Aug 14, 2018 7:33 pm

Alright this is Approved