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PostSubject: Makoto Specifics    Makoto Specifics  EmptyTue Oct 31, 2017 11:01 am

Name: Scorch Release: Chakra Mode
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Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Range: Self
Description: The Scorch Release Chakra Mode is a heightened transformation unique to those who possess Scorch Release. The user envelops themselves within a viel of Scorch Release chakra, thus allowing them to become virtually invincible to that of heat based ninjutsu as well as physical attacks. Due to the immense heat, the Scorch-Seeking Orbs along with the rest of the chakra mode burn away and melt ninjutsu such as Steel, Wood, and even some earth based Ninjutsu and Taijutsu based attacks. Due to fire being "lighter" than air this mode allows flight due to the "fire" portion of scorch release. Due to the heat of scorch release the user's speed and strength is also enhanced because of the heat of the muscles allowing them to grow and improve rapidly. Touching the user results in excruciating 1st degree burns and weakness in the area of attack. 140 Activation, S Rank Upkeep
+35 Speed
+25 Strength
Requirements: Scorch Release, GM Ninjutsu, Must Learn from Makoto

Name: Scorch Release: Searing Palm Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Range: Touch
Description: The user coats his hands and feet in the flames of his scorching chakra. When the user strikes a target, the fire evaporates the water in the area it touches, heavily weakening the target with each strike. This augments the user's taijutsu, and can cripple other taijutsu users. As this technique uses extreme heat, it bypasses personal armor. The user has another variation of this technique where the fires can be spread to projectile weapons and can increase this attacks range. 70+ Durability to have no effect
Requirements: Scorch Release, Must learn from Makoto

Name: Scorch Release: Shiroitaiyō Desert
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Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Range: 200m
Description: The user focuses Scorch Release chakra through their being, which then manifests as a large, glowing halo suspended above their body. The fiery ring begins to rapidly spin in place, immensely heating up the surroundings as it does with. Within seconds, it an immense amount of heat, completely conflagrating the surrounding environment. This causes the sky itself to glow an eerie orange color as a hole opens up within it as the ensuing flames spread out to further the range of the technique.. The technique is self sustaining once formed, heating up within seconds to such temperatures that it can reduce a large forest to dust in an instant as the technique takes burns off the chakra used to create it over time.

Despite the extremely lethal temperatures the technique is capable of generating, the user seems to be completely immune to the technique. The halo can be thrown long distances to set off the techniques effects elsewhere, even acting as a catalyst for other techniques. Should the halo come into contact with anything in the path of its trajectory, it will burn clean through it. 500 Chakra Cost.
Requirements: Scorch Release, Must Learn from Makoto

Name: Secret Wood Prison
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Mokuton
Range: 20m
Description: The user, using any other Wood Release creations, will instantly erect a dome that continues underground that once trapped within it negates the use of ninjutsu and genjutsu. With this technique, the target is slowly drained of chakra the longer they stay in there, and more chakra they build up, the quicker the draining pace. At it's slowest, it takes an hour to drain chakra. The chakra drained goes to the user as long as the user has hand contact The barrier is very durable, but a master of the Chakra Enhanced Strength can break through it. However, with the more chakra it drains the more durable it becomes. Ninjutsu that is casted within the barrier, by the target, will almost instantly be destroyed and absorbed. If it is a chakra based ninjutsu, like Rasengan or Spider Web Unrolling, it will instantly be absorbed. 80 durability, absorbs at 50 Stamina with from each person contained.
Requirements: Mokuton, Must learn from Makoto


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PostSubject: Re: Makoto Specifics    Makoto Specifics  EmptyTue Oct 31, 2017 10:33 pm

Makoto wrote:
Name: Scorch Release: Chakra Mode
Picture:
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Range: Self
Description: The Scorch Release Chakra Mode is a heightened transformation unique to those who possess Scorch Release. The user envelops themselves within a viel of Scorch Release chakra, thus allowing them to become virtually invincible to that of heat based ninjutsu as well as physical attacks. Due to the immense heat, the Scorch-Seeking Orbs along with the rest of the chakra mode burn away and melt ninjutsu such as Steel, Wood, and even some earth based Ninjutsu and Taijutsu based attacks. Due to fire being "lighter" than air this mode allows flight due to the "fire" portion of scorch release. Due to the heat of scorch release the user's speed and strength is also enhanced because of the heat of the muscles allowing them to grow and improve rapidly. Touching the user results in excruciating 1st degree burns and weakness in the area of attack.
+35 Speed
+25 Strength
Requirements: Scorch Release, GM Ninjutsu, Must Learn from Makoto

(Okay, so im gonna say this needs to have at least an activation of 140 and then S-rank upkeep as it basically makes you untouchable.)

Name: Scorch Release: Searing Palm Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Range: Touch
Description: The user coats his hands and feet in the flames of his scorching chakra. When the user strikes a target, the fire evaporates the water in the area it touches, heavily weakening the target with each strike. This augments the user's taijutsu, and can cripple other taijutsu users. As this technique uses extreme heat, it bypasses personal armor. The user has another variation of this technique where the fires can be spread to projectile weapons and can increase this attacks range.
Requirements: Scorch Release, Must learn from Makoto
(Not sure how I feel about bypassing armor. Does this bypass durability if no armor is worn?)

Name: Scorch Release: Shiroitaiyō Desert
Picture:
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Scorch
Range: 200m
Description: The user focuses Scorch Release chakra through their being, which then manifests as a large, glowing halo suspended above their body. The fiery ring begins to rapidly spin in place, immensely heating up the surroundings as it does with. Within seconds, it an immense amount of heat, completely conflagrating the surrounding environment. This causes the sky itself to glow an eerie orange color as a hole opens up within it as the ensuing flames spread out to further the range of the technique.. The technique is self sustaining once formed, heating up within seconds to such temperatures that it can reduce a large forest to dust in an instant as the technique takes burns off the chakra used to create it over time.

Despite the extremely lethal temperatures the technique is capable of generating, the user seems to be completely immune to the technique. The halo can be thrown long distances to set off the techniques effects elsewhere, even acting as a catalyst for other techniques. Should the halo come into contact with anything in the path of its trajectory, it will burn clean through it.
Requirements: Scorch Release, Must Learn from Makoto
(Big NO. Self-sustaining? Reducing entire forests in a 200m radius to dust in an instant? for this jutsu to work it needs a big nerf or some blaring weaknesses.)


Name: Secret Wood Prison
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Mokuton
Range: 20m
Description: The user, using any other Wood Release creations, will instantly erect a dome that continues underground that once trapped within it negates the use of ninjutsu and genjutsu. With this technique, the target is slowly drained of chakra the longer they stay in there, and more chakra they build up, the quicker the draining pace. At it's slowest, it takes an hour to drain chakra. The chakra drained does not go to the user, but rather is used to sustain the barrier itself, in retrospect going to the user as it will allow them to conserve chakra by not having to enforce the barrier themselves. The barrier is very durable, but a master of the Chakra Enhanced Strength can break through it. However, with the more chakra it drains the more durable it becomes. Ninjutsu that is casted within the barrier, by the target, will almost instantly be destroyed and absorbed. If it is a chakra based ninjutsu, like Rasengan or Spider Web Unrolling, it will instantly be absorbed. Starts at 80 durability, absorbs at 50 Stamina with from each person contained. With every 25 Chakra absorbed, the Dome increases Durability by 10.
Requirements: Mokuton, Must learn from Makoto
(This one also seems undeniably OP. Basically, the only way out is through Taijutsu, but if you are in it too long, it basically auto knocks you out and gains durability? I mean... really?)
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PostSubject: Re: Makoto Specifics    Makoto Specifics  EmptyTue Oct 31, 2017 10:42 pm

1) Added your requirements.
2) Added Durability
3) Added a huge Chakra Cost
4) Changed it up
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PostSubject: Re: Makoto Specifics    Makoto Specifics  EmptyTue Oct 31, 2017 10:54 pm

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