Jae Jutsu

Name: King Fisher
Rank: D
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Description: For the aspiring young weaponsmaster, this technique allows the user full access to his expansive arsenal of blades. By focusing his spirit upon a weapon which he owns, he is able to summon it instantly back to his hand. The proper tool is thus always at hand.

Name: Canary
Rank: B
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: Sight
Description: The warrior selects a weapon(s) or chakra blade(s) which he has and runs his chakra wildly through it/them. By doing this the blade ignite with a brilliant illumination which makes it neigh impossible to look directly upon them. Anyone who directly looks at a weapon upon this technique's activation will be blinded for one post and looking at them for as long as it is maintained will cause continued blindness. For every 10 perception anyone other than the user has above 100 the blindness is increased by 1 post.

Name: Crow Feather Ritual
Rank: A
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 100m
Description: With a general malice towards the ninja world and all that it has built,
the warrior releases his chakra in wide area, marked visibly by ethereal, impressionist-like black feathers which float about. This region becomes cursed by the strange ritual the bladesman performs, resulting in an inversion in all stat changes. This does not affect static changes, such as those provided via blood lines, but instead targets those buffs and debuffs with an activation and/or upkeep cost associated.

Name: Hummingbird
Rank: C
Type: Body
Element: N/A
Range: 5m
Description: Perhaps the ancestral origins of the Water Walking and other related techniques, the practitioner coats his body in a thing but pliable layer of chakra. This allows them to manipulate themselves without actual muscle movements, most commonly permitting them to skate across the ground as if on ice. This is not limited to only the feet though and the warrior may slide about on any part of their body. Additionally, this allows the user to "dash" through the air, though the range is very short. Regardless, they can reorient themselves when airborne, giving them extreme maneuverability.

Name: Lyrebird
Rank: D
Type: Body
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: One of a select handful of deceitful maneuvers within the arsenal of an otherwise honorable warrior, this devious technique artificially creates a "tell" where otherwise there would not be one. By flexing particular muscles and exerting an extreme mastery of one's own body, the warrior can make it appear as if they are about to perform one particular movement when in reality he is about to engage in something entirely different. The more perceptive the opponent, the more deadly this can be as they are more apt to misinterpret the false information.

I'd like confirmation on how King Fisher specifically works. If you're just sealing the weapon to your hand, that would be pure Fuinjutsu and no Bukijutsu, but if you're transporting it from a physical place to your hand then it would be Space manipulation, or Jikukan Ninjutsu. So if it's purely just sealing an arsenal of weapons, just make it Fuinjutsu, if it's transporting it from being thrown or held somewhere else make it pure Jikukan Ninjutsu, and if for some reason you want to change it to be both then make it Fuinjutsu/Jikukan Ninjutsu.

For Canary, change the text from 1/4th of a post to just part of a post as a downside to looking at the weapon while the ability is maintained. Since posts can be any length, I wouldn't want someone to potentially force people to count out a set number of words in their post to make sure their character's blinded for long enough. Additionally, instead of Perception making someone more blinded, I'd like for this ability to have a set number for how perceptive someone needs to be to avoid the blinding effect for activation and upkeep because losing a turn in a sword fight is so potentially dangerous that there should be a way around it if you want this to stay a C-Ranked technique.

Crow Feather Ritual is awesome. I don't know if it's technically a Funijutsu, but I don't really know what else it would be, so I'll go with that.

For Hummingbird, I'd change it to C Rank. It gives you a lot of crazy mobility options for a D Rank and having a sort-of air dash seems like a bit more than most D Ranks typically give you for one technique.

Finally, Lyrebird seems fine. No changes needed.

Hope these changes are acceptable.

Kingfisher: Yeah it's just sealing. I took out the buki part.

Canary: Mostly fixed I think. Most doujutsu and stuff increase perception by increasing your vision, which should make brighter lights more dangerous. So this is to help combat doujutsu people if that makes sense. I can bump the rank if need be.

Crow Feather: <3

Hummingbird: Bumped up.

Perception also includes an ability to notice things as well as reaction times so I don't think it would be purely just better eyesight, but by that logic I suppose at 100 you'd be able to hear where someone is as well. So bump it up to B Rank and I'll consider Canary balanced since it's a trick you'd only really be able to catch someone off-guard with once before they become way more careful about looking directly at the blades.

Adjusted!

Approved

Name: Harpy Eagle's Wing Beat
Rank: C
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 3 m
Description: By releasing an uncontrolled burst of pure chakra in a spherical pattern from one's own body, the user is able to repel enemies and weak (non-technique based) projectiles. This particular jutsu does no real damage and the concussive strike of the pressure burst is negligible to even the frailest of foes. Instead, it serves to quickly move a group of opponents away from the user, oft in preparation for a counter strike. The burst deposits those bodies affected exactly 3 meters away from the user.

Name: Wing Beat of Golden Eagle
Rank: B-S
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 8 m
Description: A more powerful form of the parent technique, this explosive sphere of chakra is powerful enough to cause notable concussive damage and repel jutsu of equal or lesser rank. The blast is much more potent at the center and can cause intense bruising and potential bone breakage to those very close to the user who are not hearty enough to resist. Power and speed are equal to the user's. Deals damage as if 1 rank lower than the rank used (B = C damage) unless struck at point blank range by the blast (within 2 feet of the user).

Name: Pigeon
Rank: D
Type: Body
Element: Lightning
Range: Self/Touch
Description: By flowing chakra within body, the user can numb particular parts of his body by generating a low powered electrical current within himself. This does not heal the affected area but can be useful when pain becomes too great to bare. By touching another he can also extend this to the region of the body he touches which is rather helpful when anesthetics are not available.

Name: Jay Plume Liturgy
Rank: A
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 30 m
Description: Something between a technique, fighting style, and art form, this ritual allows the user to materialize blades of pure chakra with which to fight either via his hands or by moving them around within his field of influence telekenetically. The weapon forms can be altered at will but may not exceed 2 meters in length. The blades have strength equal to the user's, endurance equal to half his chakra stat, and the user may make one plus an additional per 100 total chakra he has.

The true strength of this is not the ability to never be without weaponry but instead their binding abilities. A powerful Samurai ritual, the glowing chakra which crafts these weapons is a powerful binding agent akin to the Crow Feather Ritual. This allows them to seal the chakra of anything with which they come into contact. An item animated by chakra cut or pierced with one of these will lose its chakra connection, though the connection can be re-established. A person pierced with this shall have their chakra sealed for as long as the contact is maintained. When clashing with weapons and items, the user may, upon establishing contact, fuse one weapon with the item in question, sealing the abilities of it for as long the upkeep is paid.

Name: Snow Owl
Rank: C
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Description: A coating applied to a weapon or, if so inclined, a shield. Once applied, the marking seals away the item's visible form, rendering it invisible. This can hide the exact shape or size of a sword or other weapon. Of course, the item remains invisible to the wielder as well so it's best to use on something he is familiar with. Also best not to drop it. The seal will deactivate if used on a ranged weapon/projectile. Foes with 50 or more perception can make out the general dimensions within 2 posts, 75 or higher within one. Chakra sight can see through this instantaneously.

All approved except for Wing Beat of Golden Eagle, Jay Plume Liturgy, and Snow Owl.

Wing Beat of Golden Eagle seems kind-of strong for being able to repel most jutsu while also dealing damage. I don't know if you had a specific damage range in mind that didn't come across, but I think that if the technique deals damage, that damage should be one rank lower than the Rank of the jutsu. So using it at A Rank does B Rank damage, etc.

Jay Plume Liturgy is kind-of awkward because it's so potentially strong. I probably should nerf it a bit, but since it's an Uzumaki Ritual, I'd settle for being a part of the Uzumaki Clan being one of the requirements with no other changes needed.

Snow Owl needs a Perception number at which an opponent can potentially make out the shape of the weapon since fighting something without knowing its length is kind-of nuts. Also, having a counter seems kind-of vital since it could also be used to coat ranged weapons which would make them impossible to avoid otherwise.

I think I fixed them up.

Wing Beat is supposed to be almost exclusively defensive. Added the damage reduction but included you take full damage if you're point blank.

Jay Plume is only for Uzumaki and now says as much.

Snow Owl wasn't supposed to work on anything ranged. I just forgot about that cuz I have no ranged things. DX But fixed. Also added some perception info. I think that should help out?

Approved

Name: Swan Mate
Rank: A
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: Touch/Weapon Length
Description: The user surrounds a chosen weapon with a layer of chakra which then fuses with the actual material of said implement. The chakra clings with relative strength to the material and mimics its ever property for the course of the attack. Somewhere between an official fighting style and a singular weapon-based cloning technique, this amounts in any strike by the weapon in question having a cloned attack occurring at the same moment and targeted at the same area, effectively doubling its power. Any effect present on the parent blade is also copied onto this mirrored strike.

Approved

Name: Rising Dove
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 30m
Description: A ninjutsu applied to a currently activated fuinjutsu, this augmentation causes the fuinjutsu in question to be treated as an S ranked fuinjutsu for the duration of this technique. This does not increase the power or functionality of the seal it targets, rather it simply makes it a higher rank and thus more difficult to break. Naturally, this cannot be maintained indefinitely and has a rather short range, making it mainly useful for restraining other fuinjutsu masters. Requires GM in fuinjutsu; Uzumaki only.

Name: Pelican
Rank: D-S
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Description: After forming the requisite four hand seals, the user touches a particular fuinjutsu he wishes to seal. A pelican figure then forms, encasing the seal in question within its open beak, sealing that seal and thus negating it unless this seal is broken. Care must be taken as well, for a simple seal removal technique which removes this seal will also remove whichever seal the pelican has “eaten.” The rank of this seal used must match that of the seal it is sealing.

Name: Vulture Quill Sacrament
Rank: B
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 100m
Description: By releasing a wave of chakra, the user is able to propagate a chakra field which inverts the effectiveness of medical chakras within the area. The area affected is filled with squat, surrealist vulture feathers, each white with a dark brown tip. Medical techniques and abilities within the vicinity intended to heal will instead cause decay and degeneration, while the rare medical ability which degenerates or harms will instead heal.

Name: Jailbird
Rank: A-S
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: A shielding technique which solidifies the user's spirit, this ability is used to create an incredibly potent barrier. This technique generates a kind of shell around the user's body with high defensive power, acting as a sort of armor which can outright absorb weak attacks or heavily weaken even powerful blows. It is unaffected by special additions of chakra, such as elemental damage. 80 durability for A rank, 120 for S.

I'm not sure what you mean with Rising Dove.... It raises the rank of a seal to make it stronger but it doesn't make it more powerful or functional? That seems kind-of contradictory. Also, I'm pretty shaky on the logistics of a technique that can make any seal S Rank without, itself, being an S Rank Fuinjutsu or requiring Grandmaster in Fuinjutsu. Add in a requirement for the user to have Grandmaster Fuinjutsu and clarify what exactly this means a bit, and then it'll probably be fine.

Pelican looks fine, but I assume you have the Rank Range because you need to cast the Jutsu at the rank of the seal being unsealed, right? If this is the case, please add a line saying that for clarity.

Vulture Quill looks super interesting.... Approved.

Jailbird needs a Durability rating since it's an object being used as armor. So set a number for it being used as at A Rank and one for it being used at S Rank and it'll be approved.

Fixed the first two I believe.

Rising Dove does not actually increase the effectiveness of a seal, just the difficulty of breaking it. So say a seal locks a chest or something and you can force it open with 60 strength or you could remove the seal with high enough fuin abilities/the right jutsu. This does not change how much strength to break it but just makes it harder to remove if you are a fuin person. So the seals don't get more powerful, they just become harder to remove with seal removing jutsu and whatnot.

Jailbird isn't an armor it's a barrier. If that still needs a durability I'll add it in, just want to make sure.

Rising Dove and Pelican are approved

I'd still like a Durability number for Jailbird since, even if it's not specifically armor, from my understanding you're still using it like armor for anything that's not a Jutsu, right? But if it can't block physical non-technique attacks, then that's fine, too, as long as it's specified.

You the best!

Fixed, but idk if the numbers are right. Not really sure what to go off of.

I'd change the numbers to 80 and 120, if that's alright with you. 100 for an A Rank seems a bit high.

Fixed!

Approved

Name: Toucan
Rank: S
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: Length of Weapon + 1m
Description: By channeling an immense amount of chakra into a weapon, the user grants it the highest tier cutting power (or smashing power for blunt instruments). The weapon glows an opalescent shimmer when this is activated and takes on two unique properties. First, the overwhelming energy infused into the weapon allows a swing from this ability to cleave through water or air as if it were a solid and damage constructs made entirely from pure chakra. Secondly, the weapon will slice cleanly through anything, including other blades, whose durability fails to exceed the combine power of this technique plus the base power at which the weapon is swung. Of course if and when this ability meets an object which it cannot cut through it can still damage said items, such as cutting partially through it, but generally this allows a master swordsman to slice as cleanly through a ninja weapon as he would a leaf. This covering can extend the length of the weapon by up to 1 meter.
Requirements: Jae

Name: Peacock Ambiance  
Rank: A,S
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: After applying an elegant seal to his body, the user can, upon realizing he is trapped within a genjutsu, course his chakra to this seal in order seal that illusion away, freeing him much like the traditional kai technique would do. The secret to this, however, has nothing to do with removing the illusion but rather the sealing itself. Once this technique has been used on a genjutsu the bearer becomes immune to that specific genjutsu in the future. This is utterly ineffective against limited genjutsu.
Requirements: Jae

Name: Hawkeye 
Rank: D
Type: Body
Element: Wind
Range: 15m
Description: Misnamed entirely, this technique uses a field of wind chakra to artificially extend his sensory field. The simple saturation of chakra within the air allows the user to detect anything moving within that air as if it were an extension of himself and he was touching every surface of these objects. The range is nothing phenomenal though and thus it is rather poor at gathering information.
Requirements: Jae

Bump if that's cool.

Hiroshige wrote:

Name: Toucan
Rank: S
Type: Bukijutsu/Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Length of Weapon
Description: By channeling an immense amount of chakra into a weapon, the user grants it the highest tier cutting power (or smashing power for blunt instruments). The weapon glows an opalescent shimmer when this is activated and takes on two unique properties. First, the overwhelming energy infused into the weapon allows a swing from this ability to cleave through water or air as if it were a solid and damage constructs made entirely from pure chakra. Secondly, the weapon will slice cleanly through anything, including other blades, whose durability fails to exceed the combine power of this technique plus the base power at which the weapon is swung. Of course if and when this ability meets an object which it cannot cut through it can still damage said items, such as cutting partially through it, but generally this allows a master swordsman to slice as cleanly through a ninja weapon as he would a leaf.
Requirements: Jae

This technique is a bit confusing. Are you saying that this has the ability to cut through intangible constructs as if they were tangible? Also do you receive some sort of strength boost or power boost via this ability?

Name: Peacock Ambiance  
Rank: A,S
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: After applying an elegant seal to his body, the user can, upon realizing he is trapped within a genjutsu, course his chakra to this seal in order seal that illusion away, freeing him much like the traditional kai technique would do. The secret to this, however, has nothing to do with removing the illusion but rather the seal itself. Once this technique has been used on a genjutsu the bearer becomes immune to that specific genjutsu until/unless the seal is removed or destroyed. This is utterly ineffective against limited genjutsu.
Requirements: Jae

Approved

Name: Black Canary  
Rank: B
Type: Medical?
Element: Lightning + Wind
Range: Self
Description: When a warrior's body is damaged or altered, he must maintain his composure and fight on. With this technique, the user channels his lightning and wind based chakra both within and without his body and seizes manual control using only his thoughts, allowing electrical chakras to forcibly contract his muscles and wind chakras to move him about should even his muscles fail. The technique is intentionally redundant such that if one form of self manipulation fails the other can compensate. Thus, so long as he remains conscious, the warrior can fight on through paralytic effects and other similar maladies.
Requirements: Jae

This ability needs some sort of drawback to completely ignor a body that shouldn't work without any side effects doesnt seem right. I would suggest that for each post this is active the user loses 5 stats in each area as well as this requiring some sort of upkeep maybe C Rank chakra.

Name: Hawkeye 
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: 15m
Description: Misnamed entirely, this technique uses a field of wind chakra to artificially extend his sensory field. The simple saturation of chakra within the air allows the user to detect anything moving within that air as if it were an extension of himself and he was touching every surface of these objects. The range is nothing phenomenal though and thus it is rather poor at gathering information.
Requirements: Jae

Approved

I'm Lucifer BTW

Yes, toucan can cut through intangible objects/items/etc. No it does not give a strength boost or anything, its power is based on the user's strength though. Removed the other one.

Changed these to samurai based skills.