Jae Jutsu

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Ok, went back through and changed all techniques to samurai based skills. Also removed all elements and had to just cancel a few since I no longer have fuinjutsu. Adding these:

Name: Green Finch
Rank: C
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: 30 m
Description:  By forcing chakra into a weapon the user is holding, he can extend the weapon forward like a gunshot. When doing this, the weapon goes through something akin to a transmutation of sorts, becoming an elongated, whip-like form of itself, the path of which the user can control. The power and speed of this are dependent upon the weapon itself, mimicking the power and speed at which the user would normally swing it. Once canceled, the excess portions of the blade simply disappear, returning the weapon to its normal shape and size.
Requirements: Jae

Name: Gray Duckling
Rank: C
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: 30 m
Description: Coating the weapon in question in a layer of chakra, the user swings or thrusts the blade and releases said energy in a straight line which matches the shape of the arc of the swing, creating a kind of thin wave of slicing energy. This technique matches the power of the swing of the sword but is unique in that it is very slow, moving at one fourth the speed of the user and thus taking 2 full posts to reach its final destination. Curiously, it is so attuned with the user’s chakra that it does not interact with them, allowing the samurai to run right through it and incur no damage.
Requirements: Jae

Name: Pelican
Rank: B
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: 30 m
Description: By focusing his chakra into his weapon of choice, the user can create a giant, disembodied version of the weapon to confront giant monsters, summons, bijuu, or structures, or simply to attack enemies at a range with a giant's blade. The huge spiritual weapon mimics the user's movements, can be canceled at will, and has a strength and endurance of 30 more than the user's base.
Requirements: Jae

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Name: King Fisher
Rank: D
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Description: For the aspiring young weaponsmaster, this technique allows the user full access to his expansive arsenal of blades. By focusing his spirit upon a weapon which he owns, he is able to summon it instantly back to his hand. The proper tool is thus always at hand.

Name: Canary
Rank: B
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: Sight
Description: The warrior selects a weapon(s) or chakra blade(s) which he has and runs his chakra wildly through it/them. By doing this the blade ignite with a brilliant illumination which makes it neigh impossible to look directly upon them. Anyone who directly looks at a weapon upon this technique's activation will be blinded for one post and looking at them for as long as it is maintained will cause continued blindness. For every 10 perception anyone other than the user has above 100 the blindness is increased by 1 post.

Name: Crow Feather Ritual
Rank: A
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 100m
Description: With a general malice towards the ninja world and all that it has built,
the warrior releases his chakra in wide area, marked visibly by ethereal, impressionist-like black feathers which float about. This region becomes cursed by the strange ritual the bladesman performs, resulting in an inversion in all stat changes. This does not affect static changes, such as those provided via blood lines, but instead targets those buffs and debuffs with an activation and/or upkeep cost associated.

Name: Hummingbird
Rank: C
Type: Body
Element: N/A
Range: 5m
Description: Perhaps the ancestral origins of the Water Walking and other related techniques, the practitioner coats his body in a thing but pliable layer of chakra. This allows them to manipulate themselves without actual muscle movements, most commonly permitting them to skate across the ground as if on ice. This is not limited to only the feet though and the warrior may slide about on any part of their body. Additionally, this allows the user to "dash" through the air, though the range is very short. Regardless, they can reorient themselves when airborne, giving them extreme maneuverability.

Name: Lyrebird
Rank: D
Type: Body
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: One of a select handful of deceitful maneuvers within the arsenal of an otherwise honorable warrior, this devious technique artificially creates a "tell" where otherwise there would not be one. By flexing particular muscles and exerting an extreme mastery of one's own body, the warrior can make it appear as if they are about to perform one particular movement when in reality he is about to engage in something entirely different. The more perceptive the opponent, the more deadly this can be as they are more apt to misinterpret the false information.



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Name: Harpy Eagle's Wing Beat
Rank: C
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 3 m
Description: By releasing an uncontrolled burst of pure chakra in a spherical pattern from one's own body, the user is able to repel enemies and weak (non-technique based) projectiles. This particular jutsu does no real damage and the concussive strike of the pressure burst is negligible to even the frailest of foes. Instead, it serves to quickly move a group of opponents away from the user, oft in preparation for a counter strike. The burst deposits those bodies affected exactly 3 meters away from the user.

Name: Wing Beat of Golden Eagle
Rank: B-S
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 8 m
Description: A more powerful form of the parent technique, this explosive sphere of chakra is powerful enough to cause notable concussive damage and repel jutsu of equal or lesser rank. The blast is much more potent at the center and can cause intense bruising and potential bone breakage to those very close to the user who are not hearty enough to resist. Power and speed are equal to the user's. Deals damage as if 1 rank lower than the rank used (B = C damage) unless struck at point blank range by the blast (within 2 feet of the user).

Name: Pigeon
Rank: D
Type: Body
Element: Lightning
Range: Self/Touch
Description: By flowing chakra within body, the user can numb particular parts of his body by generating a low powered electrical current within himself. This does not heal the affected area but can be useful when pain becomes too great to bare. By touching another he can also extend this to the region of the body he touches which is rather helpful when anesthetics are not available.

Name: Jay Plume Liturgy
Rank: A
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 30 m
Description: Something between a technique, fighting style, and art form, this ritual allows the user to materialize blades of pure chakra with which to fight either via his hands or by moving them around within his field of influence telekenetically. The weapon forms can be altered at will but may not exceed 2 meters in length. The blades have strength equal to the user's, endurance equal to half his chakra stat, and the user may make one plus an additional per 100 total chakra he has.

The true strength of this is not the ability to never be without weaponry but instead their binding abilities. A powerful Samurai ritual, the glowing chakra which crafts these weapons is a powerful binding agent akin to the Crow Feather Ritual. This allows them to seal the chakra of anything with which they come into contact. An item animated by chakra cut or pierced with one of these will lose its chakra connection, though the connection can be re-established. A person pierced with this shall have their chakra sealed for as long as the contact is maintained. When clashing with weapons and items, the user may, upon establishing contact, fuse one weapon with the item in question, sealing the abilities of it for as long the upkeep is paid.

Name: Snow Owl
Rank: C
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Description: A coating applied to a weapon or, if so inclined, a shield. Once applied, the marking seals away the item's visible form, rendering it invisible. This can hide the exact shape or size of a sword or other weapon. Of course, the item remains invisible to the wielder as well so it's best to use on something he is familiar with. Also best not to drop it. The seal will deactivate if used on a ranged weapon/projectile. Foes with 50 or more perception can make out the general dimensions within 2 posts, 75 or higher within one. Chakra sight can see through this instantaneously.






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Name: Swan Mate
Rank: A
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: Touch/Weapon Length
Description: The user surrounds a chosen weapon with a layer of chakra which then fuses with the actual material of said implement. The chakra clings with relative strength to the material and mimics its ever property for the course of the attack. Somewhere between an official fighting style and a singular weapon-based cloning technique, this amounts in any strike by the weapon in question having a cloned attack occurring at the same moment and targeted at the same area, effectively doubling its power. Any effect present on the parent blade is also copied onto this mirrored strike.


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Name: Vulture Quill Sacrament
Rank: B
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: 100m
Description: By releasing a wave of chakra, the user is able to propagate a chakra field which inverts the effectiveness of medical chakras within the area. The area affected is filled with squat, surrealist vulture feathers, each white with a dark brown tip. Medical techniques and abilities within the vicinity intended to heal will instead cause decay and degeneration, while the rare medical ability which degenerates or harms will instead heal.

Name: Jailbird
Rank: A-S
Type: Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: A shielding technique which solidifies the user's spirit, this ability is used to create an incredibly potent barrier. This technique generates a kind of shell around the user's body with high defensive power, acting as a sort of armor which can outright absorb weak attacks or heavily weaken even powerful blows. It is unaffected by special additions of chakra, such as elemental damage. 80 durability for A rank, 120 for S.

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You are all good as far as jutsu go.

Name: Thunderbird  
Rank: D,C,B,A,S
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Description: Born of legendary mastery over all technique, this skill allows the user to pick up any weapon and instantly wield it as if he were that blades owner, master, and forger. He can automatically comprehend the weapon's intent and inner workings and use any techniques associated with it that he would otherwise be able use (must have appropriate skills, etc. Would have to learn weapon specific jutsu before using them, but can use the base abilities of the weapon as normal). Additionally, external control of that weapon is cut off for as long as he holds it and the weapon itself is suppressed, rendering it incapable of anything but obeying its new usurper. The rank used must match or exceed the rank of the weapon and the upkeep is equal to one rank lower.
Requirements: Jae, Grandmaster in Technique

Name: Phoenix  
Rank: B
Type: Technique
Element: N/A
Range: Weapon length
Description: Another technique of unparalleled skill with the blade, this uses pure chakra as a catalyst of creation, reforging and repairing a weapon in hand. Thus, with this, the samurai shall never fear a broken blade as he can restore any arms to its original glory. The repair occurs at twice the user's speed and will never require more than one posts to complete. Once completed, the blade is as good as new, as if the damage done unto it had never occurred.
Requirements: Jae

For the first jutsu, you’d be unable to use any jutsu associated with a blade unless you had learned the jutsu.

Fixed accordingly.

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Name: Departure  
Rank: C
Type: Body
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: By using his pure ninshu, the samurai coats his body in chakra which allows for a form of flight. This can be thought of as an incredibly advanced form of the ninja's Water Walking Technique in which the user coats his entire body in a similar principle and intensifies it such that he can 'float' upon the air. Then, by directing the forces of his chakra coating he can move himself through space and achieve a flight-like status. Speed and maneuverability is equal to the user's. C rank upkeep.
Requirements: Jae

Name: Golden Crane Replicant
Rank: S
Type: Body & Spirit
Element: N/A
Range: Thread (Country)
Description: A samurai technique which far predates the shadow clone jutsu and other similar abilities, this technique uses pure chakra to replicate the warrior's body, simultaneously imbuing it with a portion temporary portion of his soul or spirit, granting it a form of short-lived life. These clones are of the highest quality such that they shame the standards of today's ninja, have stats which equal the user's base, and are created fully with copies of the user's weapons. By all accounts, including sensory abilities, they cannot be distinguished from their creator. Each replica costs an S rank of chakra to create and has an A rank upkeep, though the upkeep is drawn from the chakra of the clone.

Copies can use any technique or ability the creator can and cannot leave the thread the user is in, with the exception of a singular clone which cannot leave the country the user is in. They can take damage as a normal body but, upon being rendered dead, their body will dissolve into golden light. The user can summon any number of copies that he wishes, but the total base chakra of all clones will be equal to half of his base chakra stat, divided evenly among all created clones. This means that he could create one rather powerful clone or a collection of more limited ones.
Requirements: Jae

Name: Crow Feather Ritual
Rank: S
Type: Spirit | Limited
Element: N/A
Range: 100m
Description: With a general malice towards the ninja world and all that it has built,
the warrior releases his chakra in wide area, marked visibly by ethereal, impressionist-like black feathers which float about. This region becomes cursed by the strange ritual the bladesman performs, resulting in an inversion in all stat changes. This does not affect static changes, such as those provided via blood lines, but instead targets those buffs and debuffs with an activation and/or upkeep cost associated. This jutsu is easily rendered burdensome by simply not increasing one's stats, however beyond this there is no real way around the curse. It cannot be "negated" or "nullified" through jutsu or other means once activated, including by stat differentials in defensive jutsu and this technique, as this ritual has no offensive capabilities and to negate it would be to end one's own stat changes. Instead, it simply checks if any active stat changes exist within its domain and, if present, it inverts them. As a price, even the use is not immune to this curse and must abide by its rule at all times as it centers on himself. Thus, it creates an even playing field for all in which every combatant is confined to the normal limitations of their body. This has no effect on bijuu cloaks.

Pure Joy: This is a limited whose only effect is to make other techniques temporarily into sublimited offspring of this technique. Right now, extra chakra makes them more powerful. I can make it use "pure Ninshu" if you like, but I'm honestly not sure what that would even mean.

Departure: Sure. Fix these please:

Bet wrote:

Name: Flight
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Ki
Range: Self
Description: The user manipulates their energy in such a way that it provides thrust and lift to allow them the ability to fly. This can be preformed at the users current speed and costs 30 activation and 15 upkeep.  
Requirements: Shoten Clan

Senjiro wrote:

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Name: Hiryuu no Jutsu ▬ Flight of the Dragon Technique
Rank: C-rank
Type: Bukijutsu(Shokkou)
Element: None
Range: N/A
Description: Hiryuu no Jutsu performs a very unique function whenever Senjiro channels chakra into his cloak known as Shokkou. The user quickly manipulates Shokkou and have the material form into what looks like the wings of a wyvern with a tail to match. With this the user capable of flight using the cloak. The moves at the user’s speed and the flight speed also moves at the user’s own speed.
Requirements: Shokkou(The Weaver): Senjiro

Golden Crane Replicant: I guess I'm still not really sure what we mean by ninshu here. I'm using pure chakra, which seems solid enough in most cases. If this is a statement that "clone-like techniques are forbidden from samurai" then so be it I guess. If not, which parts are too similar to Fission so I can remove them?

Crow Feather Ritual: Not really sure how anyone can say what a samurai - or ninja for that matter - "would" do. Additionally:

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Spirit: The precusor to Ninjutsu, in which allows Samurai to alter properties of pure chakra allowing it to do feats such as shape transformation, size altering, or mass manipulation. The adaptability of chakra can be extended even further allowing feats of function repurposing such as chakra producing heat, rejecting the natural flow or currents, and

That's... basically ninjutsu, even so much as to include certain, albeit limited, nature manipulations. I don't see how this is beyond the realms of possibility.

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Pure Joy: Most things like that is due to a presetup system like Chakra getting dosed with more chakra to concentrate it and the such, Also making things a "Sub-Limited" by default just cause its used by a Limited Technique seems like your just trying to stretch there, a solid boost or a Ranking boost is Suffecient, but we had no system for a Sub-Limited D-A Techs

Depature: Have left notes on similar Apps, seems someone underestimates the power of flight

Golden Crane: The closest thing I have for an example that Ninshu did with this was rather Transparent objects, so After Images and the like are possible, but full solid clones I have to say are a No

Crow Feather: To reverse ones Stat bonuses as a "Curse" would be JUinjutsu, which is a Branch of Fuin and is out of the realm of the Samurai. And the only other way I could see making this work in such a way would turn it into a Genjutsu.

The way you could possibly Pull off Crow Feather would be as a Visable Chakra Aura possibly, but again its still a stretch to try and pull this off, All Examples of Samurai we have were very Physical both with Fighting Styles and Application of Chakra (IE a Extension off a sword) SO making techniques for Samurai like this is almost always up to Subjective Opinions. However based off what i saw, I dont think this would be possible.

Pure Joy: I'm not really sure what you're getting at here and I don't know what pre-created systems do things like this. Pure Joy is basically adding more chakra for more power.

Thus far that I have seen, every instance of a sub-limited which uses a parent jutsu has been more or less fine conceptually. Some aren't even remotely related to the parent, which I personally don't care about. This jutsu serves as a blank parent jutsu with no effect of its own. If you would prefer I'm happy to reapp this as some sword draw tech and then reapp all of my jutsu as sublimiteds of it I guess.

I'm not the only person under this presumption, but sub-limiteds are currently all going off the limited jutsu scale for their base/unstated power.


Departure: Fixed


Golden Crane: I can't tell if you are talking about the visual opacity of "ninshu" or the level of solidity it has. Samurai Sabre creates a solid projection of chakra. The fact that it can cut things seems pretty solid to me.


Crow Feather: I'll change the word "curse" if that is truly such a hang up. It was suppose to be flavor text.

Genjutsu is also beyond the realm of possibility for Samurai, unless I change this to a "Body" based technique.

Crow Feather is currently a visible chakra aura. It creates a field in which stat changes are reversed. This field is visible. So I seem to be good here.

I'm getting mixed signals on weather or not samurai's use of chakra is physical. In the case of Golden Crane it seems not physical, but here it seems like it has to be.

All examples of samurai can be summed up as "have swords." I could be missing some, but I think the total list of canon techniques are Iado and Samurai Sabre. Literally 2. So we don't really have a useful body of examples to work with here. That said, I'll re-reference the quote from the description of what Spirit techniques are suppose to do.

If this is truly beyond your imagining, I'll just request that someone else looks at it.

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Fully aware you need your jutsu checked. Hiro is handling this. I am assuming he will finish it. He's gotten busy. So be a little patient. Thanks

I shall continue to remain as patient as I can. I trust you'll forgive some bumping as I have been waiting twenty-three days on these. Thank you in advance.

Removed Pure Joy for now. I don't know how I want this to turn out.

Departure has been changed back, though I think it's irresponsible to allow C rank flight.

Thank you for Golden Crane.

Turned Crow Feather to a limited to avoid it not affecting other limiteds.